Thursday, July 3, 2014


I can write sentences that have a variety of starters and lengths. 

After gathering and analyzing the information, I think businesses have more responsibility because they have a lot of different ones, for example, making sure everything runs smoothly, making sure nothing goes wrong, making sure information is clear, and so on. In conclusion, I believe businesses have more responsibility and consumers have more rights.

The highlighted parts are where i used my goal. I think I am at Extended Abstract Because i can use clauses and connectives, I know why i have use them, and I can seek feedback.

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